Olden Days

Olden Days by jdavid on Storybird

Over the week our class added to this story. Before we could add to the story we had to read over what had been written on the previous day and edit this before we could add any new pages.
After reading through our story we discovered that we were introducing too many new characters, we used too many pronouns - 'she, he or they' and we had autumn and winter happening in the same day.
We hope that you enjoy reading through our story about what life could have been like long ago.