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During this week we have been creating collaborative stories. Each of us worked with a partner and added to the stories each day. After adding to the stories we read them as a class and used the editing process to improve the stories. We enjoyed exploring storybird! Please read our stories.
Sophie by jdavid on Storybird
Sneeky Bunnies on Storybird
Our Term 3 Learning about Australian History
5 years ago
8 comments:
Hello Junior D
I love your Storybirds. I wonder if you might come over to Prep and show them how to make one? I think you would be wonderful 'experts'!
From Mrs Kennedy
This is amazing Juniors. You are doing a very hard job - writing a story together (collaborating) and trying to add on to what someone else has started. I am looking forward to seeing the stories as they get longer.
Your characters are fun, I am wondering what might happen to them?
How cute your characters were...I loved it!
Lyndal Klepac
I do hope Bella and Anna can show Sophie that being shy is ok but that she can make friends too, I wonder what adventures they might do?!
I cant wait to see what happens.
Lyndal Klepac
I really enjoyed your story Jack & Piers, keep up the amazing work!!!! Dellas
Hi JD
we really liked doing story bird.
It was really fun.
From Tessa,Natasha and Piers.
Hi JD
I really like doing story bird.
It is really fun.
What is your favourite part about doing story bird?
From Chloe.
Hi JD
i had a lot of fun doing story bird did you?
I really like doing story bird.
From Tessa
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