Sunday, September 11, 2011

New Story

We have had another go as a class to create a story together. Let us know what you think. Have we improved?

Little Donuts by jdavid on Storybird

4 comments:

Anonymous said...

Hi JD
I love reading all of our stories.
Keep up the good work.
From Chloe

Anonymous said...

Hi Junior D!

I liked your story 'Little Donuts.' I thought the characters were great...I think the mum and dad looked a little crazy though! It was a great story...well done.

Love Margie (Tessa's mum)

Room 2, Burnham School, New Zealand said...

Kia Ora,

We really enjoyed reading your Storybird “ Little Donut”. We are wondering if we could join in writing a story together if we get you our password and username.


Room 2 Burnham school New Zealand

Anonymous said...

Hi Room 2,
We would love to write a story with you.
Junior D Australia

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