We are a happy class of Prep students in the eastern suburbs of Melbourne Australia.
We love to learn from each other and share our learning with others.
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Sunday, September 11, 2011
New Story
We have had another go as a class to create a story together. Let us know what you think. Have we improved?
I liked your story 'Little Donuts.' I thought the characters were great...I think the mum and dad looked a little crazy though! It was a great story...well done.
We really enjoyed reading your Storybird “ Little Donut”. We are wondering if we could join in writing a story together if we get you our password and username.
Hi JD
ReplyDeleteI love reading all of our stories.
Keep up the good work.
From Chloe
Hi Junior D!
ReplyDeleteI liked your story 'Little Donuts.' I thought the characters were great...I think the mum and dad looked a little crazy though! It was a great story...well done.
Love Margie (Tessa's mum)
Kia Ora,
ReplyDeleteWe really enjoyed reading your Storybird “ Little Donut”. We are wondering if we could join in writing a story together if we get you our password and username.
Room 2 Burnham school New Zealand
Hi Room 2,
ReplyDeleteWe would love to write a story with you.
Junior D Australia